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jeżeli chodziło o brak oddechu to rozumiem.

podoba mi sie. lubie smutne wiersze. ten jest przejmujący. inaczej rozłozyłabym wersy. miejscami brakuje oddechu. może: w szczelinach zasłon smugi światła rozpraszały mrok naszego spojrzenia trzymając cię za rękę czułam czasem subtelny ruch powietrza za słaby by cokolwiek poruszyć poza moim sercem n...

ann13, rzadko mi sie zdarza czytać jakiś Twój wiersz na poważnie, ale ten jest inny od reszty. podoba mi się. poruszający...

"Life is the art of drawing without an eraser" John W. Gardner

thanks dean.now it's all clear

The room is not mine. One window frames an ash tree. One window lenses the world. From the wide lens of your window I can see an album of ordinary life. There's a woman unfolding a music stand with metallic determination. She picks up a flute, begins to play, and soap bubbles of notes break against ...

Take of me what is not my own my love, my beauty, and my poem - the pain is mine, and mine alone. See how against the weight in the bone the hawk hangs perfect in mid-air - the blood pays dear to raise it there, the moment, not the bird, divine. And see the peaceful trees extend their myriad leaves ...

I like to see you get up, grab a swatter and run around naked on the morning stroll you spit in my face then wipe it with a handkerchief grumbling, you got dirty you knit yellow socks for me to look nice on the white tablecloth which I'll stain anyway once a week you serve my favourite chicken soup ...

fobiak which do u prefer "good and faithful" or "pretty but unfaithful'?

well, I've tried.

Fobiak's ending however is better.

I have another idea now for the ending:

just trying to find my way

from the bar

?

I'm deaf to all your curses and in order to curb my lust I turned to writing verses slowly gathering dust There you can find the replies to your ten thosand questions or above this is how a man often lies hoping to fall out of love It's easy to get hooked but then nothing can ease the pain I know my...

to było pytanie ...

ja ten sms odczytuje jako "wymaż mnie z pamięci". ale podoba mi sie interpretacja deana, sięga myśle głębiej. "zachowaj kontrole- zmień się- zniszcz to (co między nami)- albo "oczyść umysł". olga- genialny pomysł z tym smsem...

when partial and when holistic?

what do you mean by "local nad global failure"?

to było cieniu pobożne życzenie...

[ Dodano: 2007-06-30, 13:35 ]
peel woli pozostać bierny jak kobieta

" I have not failed. I've just found 10,000 ways that won't work"

Thomas A. Edison

Ctrl+Alt+Del ?

to niech sie peel zdecyduje

[ Dodano: 2007-06-29, 09:14 ]
cieniu -miałam co innego na myśli...

the main and the only- no more clues.

czy peel jest mężczyzną?

a clue: "lyrical subject" is a man

"Drugs and alcohol are very much like an abusive lover who treats you well at first and then beats you up, apologizes, gives you nice treatment for a while, and then beats you up again. The trap is in trying to hang in there for the good while trying to overlook the bad. Wrong..." Clarissa...

"lyrical subject" wants to fuck "lyrical object" (if you know what I mean)...

Will you yield to it?
Will you plunge into madness?
dissolve in nothingness?
Will you?
Will you let me when I want to?

fuck you tonight?

mnie ten cynizm, obojętność, doświadczenie peela mimo wszystko wzrusza...zaskakuje ostrość widzenia w bezsensie życia...przejmujące wyznanie...

nieźle dean. mam nadzieje,ze to tylko wstęp- i nastąpi penetracja tej dupy...

close- evangaelical

it's a play on words. add+vice. appal=shock .

appal
a pal
to
avoid
a void

Batter my heart, three-person'd God; for you As yet but knock, breathe, shine, and seek to mend; That I may rise, and stand, o'erthrow me and bend Your force, to break, blow, burn and make me new. I, like an usurpt town, to another due, Labour to admit you, but Oh, to no end, Reason your viceroy in ...

Yes, I would like to repeat a spiritual experience but of a different kind.

lila- I was referring to the quotation.

lila-well, I haven't tried Buddhist chanting yet...

dean- try 2 in 1

yeah...I had a mega spiritual experience of cosmic orgasm when I had overdosed...

so what? maybe he's been leading a double life...

why do u think he was expelled from university?

intentions the same- to impress

i agree with jjockerr
it's a failure to paint

all my life
I've tried to paint
just one picture
the picture of him
always the same
absolutely perfect
it's still in me
unpainted

u don't need'always' if u say 'all my life'
lila is right about the tense
'quite' cannot go with 'perfect' i think

anyway,a nice poem, olga

lila-have u ever felt 'wasted'?

The most intense spiritual experiences all seem to involve the suspension of time. It is the feeling of being outside of time, of being timeless, that is the source of ecstasy in meditation, chanting, hypnosis, and psychedelic drug experiences. Although it is briefer and less lucid, a timeless, egol...

"There is a little difference between the Zulu warrior who smeared his body with lion's fat and the modern woman who dabs hers with expensive perfume. The one was trying to acquire the courage of the king of beasts, the other is attempting to acquire the irresistible sexuality of flowers. The u...

erekcjato crap 140 A decent sort of chap should smell of hard yesterday's toil His breath should give off a lingering odour of Arizona tobacco and of some spirit pervading the unattended cavities of his mouth His feet should be so sweaty so that having run your finger between his toes you could stil...

i don't think you need to read Anais. with your agile tounge you can pick up any woman I believe...

Hilda was a beautiful Parisian model who fell deeply in love with an American writer, whose work was so violent and sensual that it attracted women to him immediately. They would write him letters or try for an introduction through his friends. Those who succeeded in meeting him were always amazed b...

chyba kupie sobie psa...

jak przejde na emeryture

Strange infatuation seems to grace the evening tide. I'll take it by your side. Such imagination seems to help the feeling slide. I'll take it by your side. Instant correlation sucks and breeds a pack of lies. I'll take it by your side. Oversaturation curls the skin and tans the hide. I'll take it b...

Be careful of words, even the miraculous ones. For the miraculous ones we do our best, sometimes they swarm like insects and leave not a sting but a kiss. They can be good as fingers. They can be trusty as the rock you stick your bottom on. But they can be both daisies and bruises. Yet I am in love ...

so I've seen the competition
from now on I'm on the mission
to enhance my position
and change beyond all recognition

into a slut

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