Waiting for a glance

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dean

Waiting for a glance

Post autor: dean »

Whenever I may roam
Avoiding your sad eyes
I lay my head upon
The blue-velvet sky

I remember every move
Of your alabaster-sculped hand
That was so admiring
Taking everything
The other way round

And your cat actually liked me
Because cats like not-to-be-touched

Waiting for a glance
The touch of flickering flame
The flat field of my life
Punched by your smile
lila
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Post autor: lila »

one of the inter-poems that I go back to
even when translate it into polish it is not banal ( what often happens when one writes in foreign laguage)
congratulations ;-)
dean

Post autor: dean »

thx :->
cebreiro

Post autor: cebreiro »

It's pity that u don't write these poems polish. Maybe it's worth to translate them?
dean

Post autor: dean »

I don't think so... it was originally wroten in English... and I'm not a good translator...
cebreiro

Post autor: cebreiro »

it's pity...
dunno

Post autor: dunno »

dean pisze:I don't think so... it was originally wroten in English... and I'm not a good translator...
Try. It's fun
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