sweet dot com

[dean]

shrinking
dying out of face
you’ve come along
with your smile and taste
there’s no room to be free
just lying sentences
that nobody cares
to be me

[yin]

I'd like to be u


"a" should be deleted.

I'd also put "shrinking" in one line.

anyway, I love the poem.

[dean]

thx

[dunno]

shrinking
dying out of face
you’ve come along
with your smile and taste
there’s no room to be free
just lying sentences
that nobody cares
to be me

Ah, a little unruly puppy didn't get a sweet?

[dean]

no sweets again :(

[dunno]

I'd like to be you

[dean]

doubtful

[dunno]

Too heavy to catch irony?

[dean]

too dumb :)