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sweet dot com
: 2007-08-29, 19:50
autor: dean
shrinking
dying out of face
you’ve come along
with your smile and taste
there’s no room to be free
just lying sentences
that nobody cares
to be me
: 2007-09-10, 10:10
autor: yin
I'd like to be u
"a" should be deleted.
I'd also put "shrinking" in one line.
anyway, I love the poem.
: 2007-09-10, 22:20
autor: dean
thx
Re: sweet dot com
: 2010-09-21, 08:33
autor: dunno
dean pisze:shrinking
dying out of face
youve come along
with your smile and taste
theres no room to be free
just lying sentences
that nobody cares
to be me
Ah, a little unruly puppy didn't get a sweet?
: 2010-09-21, 13:35
autor: dean
no sweets again :(
: 2010-09-21, 17:06
autor: dunno
I'd like to be you
: 2010-09-22, 07:57
autor: dean
doubtful
: 2010-09-23, 00:43
autor: dunno
Too heavy to catch irony?
: 2010-09-23, 07:27
autor: dean
too dumb :)