-May I carry your bag? - the man asked.
-No - she answered and passed by.

The bag became much more heavy.
The street was empty.

10th February Street... sounds so funny to me...

Please, throw away the name of the street. I like the title: "On the Street."

done

Margot pisze:-May I carry your bag? - the man asked.
-No - she answered and passed by.

The bag became much more heavy.
The street was empty.

The air in the street became much heavier. Was the bag empty?

dunno pisze:Was the bag empty?

Almost.