fine erekcjato

[fobiak]

perhaps you're right
flirting with the female student
morning to evening
it is nothing for me

I am bored unhappy
but it is so interesting
to spend time dusk till dawn
with her pretty mother






























































































and father

[dean]

"The Graduate" situation... nearly, heheh...


just a suggestion, fobiak:

erekcjato live is dull
erekcjato life is dull

perhaps you're right
with the female student flirt
from morning to the evening
it is nothing for me

perhaps you're right
flirting with the female student
morning to evening/from the morning to the evening/dawn till dusk
it is nothing for me

i am bored unhappy
very interesting is spending time
of the evening until tomorrow in bed
with her pretty mother

I am bored unhappy
but it is so interesting
to spend time dusk till dawn
with her pretty mother

[fobiak]

I am bored unhappy
but it is so interesting
to spend time dusk till dawn
with "her" pretty mother /she's

[dean]

I think "her" is OK.

[fobiak]

dean her?,
not "thier"?

[dean]

"her" is definately what you want

[fobiak]

ok. ok.

[olga]

"her".
decidedly.

[dean]

now, when I've read it in Polish... I would change the title...
it would be "hard life's erekcjato"
in English... it shouldn't be "erekcjato" on the first place...
it's better to say "fine erekcjato" than "erekcjato fine"... I think...
but it still depends...