erekcjato gniot5

nic nie slysze
bo ja cie nie slucham juz
dlatego wiersze pisze
ktore pokrywa kurz

w nich znajdziesz odpowiedzi
na wszystkie twoje pytania
czlowiek czesto cos bredzi
dazac do odkochania

zakochac sie latwo
a pozniej juz same meki
wyrywam sobie wlosy
nie tylko z glowy
po to aby dojsc do siebie






















































































































z knajpy

It leave though one under
for me

erekcjato crap5

I hear nothing
because I do not listen to you
that is why I write poems
covered with dust

you will find all the answers in them
for all your questions
a man often drivels
dążąc do odkochania no idea

it is is to fall in love
and then only suffering
I tear my hair
not only from head
po to aby dojsc do siebie no clue





















































































































from the bar

Why?

because my English is poor

poor thing

I'm deaf to all your curses
and in order to curb my lust
I turned to writing verses
slowly gathering dust

There you can find the replies
to your ten thosand questions or above
this is how a man often lies
hoping to fall out of love

It's easy to get hooked
but then nothing can ease the pain
I know my goose is cooked
I'm tearing my hair out in vain

just trying to come to senses
























































after drinking

the translation is better than original I think so and differ much actually it is a new poem but the idea is the same

well, I've tried.

Fobiak's ending however is better.

I have another idea now for the ending:

just trying to find my way










from the bar

?

it's also good and more faithful I think so, but both of them are suprising

fobiak which do u prefer "good and faithful" or "pretty but unfaithful'?

I think, pretty but unfaithful is better

I agree... pretty and unfaithful

Depends what you're looking for. A wife or an affair