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erekcjato crap 36

Post autor: fobiak »

if I were a painter
I would paint red flowers
and you naked
dancing among them
with your hair flying

if I sang
in another language
because I flatten in my own
I would sing
what is on the painting

if I said
what I think
I would tell you
recite songs

if I loved
just like you do
I would say to you


























































































































































fuck off
dajcie zyc grabarzom
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Post autor: lila »

fobiak i think that you are aware of it tha this is not the erekcjato , becouse you didn't write the end of the first main text

maybe it could be in this way:

if I loved
just like you do
I would talk with you
All day











about fucking*


Nevertheless , in my opinion this is very good poem .

[ Dodano: 2007-01-24, 14:21 ]
ouh.. fuck! :)
but I have sawn in the labolatory that it isnt your text but dean's one...
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Post autor: fobiak »

possible, i know not
dajcie zyc grabarzom
dean

Post autor: dean »

the translation is mine...
this is fobiak's erekcjato :-P
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Post autor: lila »

yes , i know it know , sometimes I am perceptive :-P but I need longer period of the time :-P
in laboratory I've explained this mistake

but still i think that its not the erekcjato.

[ Dodano: 2007-01-24, 14:41 ]
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