Will you yield to it?
Will you plunge into madness?
dissolve in nothingness?
Will you?
Will you let me when I want to?

















fuck you tonight?

what a proposal!
but does it mean that the "lyrical subject" (?) wants to be fucked or just to have right to be fucked when the will will come?

"lyrical subject" wants to fuck "lyrical object" (if you know what I mean)...

that's perfectly understandable

a clue: "lyrical subject" is a man

is it the main clue?

the main and the only- no more clues.

It is sadistic; doesn't matter lyrical subject is a man or a woman. Such preparation for experience comfort in fucking makes me sick. And for the reader author is a woman, anyway.

Margot- I agree with you- it is sadistic. Usually it does not matter if the lyrical subject is a man or a woman-but I as the author I wanted it to be read as a male proposal. I'm glad the poem had an impact on you...

But -if we decide that the lyrical subject is a woman- it sounds to me masochistic...

Sadism and masochism usually go together, but this text sounds sadistic when lyrical subject is a woman, too. What makes a difference? Sex? Why?

i refuse to explain why.

sadism and masochism rarely go together. there's a joke that expains that.
A masochist asks a sadist to beat him/her very severely, to which a sadist answers with a malicious smile: "No, never..."