erekcjato ''proposal''

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erekcjato ''proposal''

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Will you yield to it?
Will you plunge into madness?
dissolve in nothingness?
Will you?
Will you let me when I want to?

















fuck you tonight?
dean

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what a proposal! :-D
but does it mean that the "lyrical subject" (?) wants to be fucked or just to have right to be fucked when the will will come? ;-)
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"lyrical subject" wants to fuck "lyrical object" (if you know what I mean)...
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that's perfectly understandable :mrgreen:
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a clue: "lyrical subject" is a man
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is it the main clue?
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the main and the only- no more clues.
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It is sadistic; doesn't matter lyrical subject is a man or a woman. Such preparation for experience comfort in fucking makes me sick. And for the reader author is a woman, anyway.
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Margot- I agree with you- it is sadistic. Usually it does not matter if the lyrical subject is a man or a woman-but I as the author I wanted it to be read as a male proposal. I'm glad the poem had an impact on you...
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But -if we decide that the lyrical subject is a woman- it sounds to me masochistic...
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Sadism and masochism usually go together, but this text sounds sadistic when lyrical subject is a woman, too. What makes a difference? Sex? Why?
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i refuse to explain why.
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sadism and masochism rarely go together. there's a joke that expains that.
A masochist asks a sadist to beat him/her very severely, to which a sadist answers with a malicious smile: "No, never..."
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