erekcjato of loss

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dean

erekcjato of loss

Post autor: dean »

there he was
in the middle of nothing
waiting for a blow of wind

and the crowd gathered
to see his kingdom
falling with the scream
of throats and bells

useless minutes
became a second
so what?
his heart was bleeding
for years

there was no cure
no doctor to make
silly diagnosis
the light in there -
it was blinding...

































...... 8.9..10... knock-down
robert kobryń

Post autor: robert kobryń »

this is definately not ere
sorry man
correct yourself
olga

Post autor: olga »

this is erekcjato.
but first of all this a good poem.
for me.
there`s no other possibility.
but I doubt whether I`ll ever be able to make myself clear.
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Post autor: fobiak »

No, that is not what "erekcjato" is. And your terms "erekcjato" are meaningless.

Rather than rushing through a quick and obviously uncomprehending reading of the "Blurbs" thread, you need to spend several weeks. You're trying to rush things and are getting nowhere, and that's the only place you'll get until you actually realize that you are going to have to invest much more time and effort than you are currently.

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