erekcjato ''proposal''

[yin]

Will you yield to it?
Will you plunge into madness?
dissolve in nothingness?
Will you?
Will you let me when I want to?

















fuck you tonight?

[dean]

what a proposal!
but does it mean that the "lyrical subject" (?) wants to be fucked or just to have right to be fucked when the will will come?

[yin]

"lyrical subject" wants to fuck "lyrical object" (if you know what I mean)...

[dean]

that's perfectly understandable

[yin]

a clue: "lyrical subject" is a man

[dean]

is it the main clue?

[yin]

the main and the only- no more clues.

[Margot]

It is sadistic; doesn't matter lyrical subject is a man or a woman. Such preparation for experience comfort in fucking makes me sick. And for the reader author is a woman, anyway.

[yin]

Margot- I agree with you- it is sadistic. Usually it does not matter if the lyrical subject is a man or a woman-but I as the author I wanted it to be read as a male proposal. I'm glad the poem had an impact on you...

[yin]

But -if we decide that the lyrical subject is a woman- it sounds to me masochistic...

[Margot]

Sadism and masochism usually go together, but this text sounds sadistic when lyrical subject is a woman, too. What makes a difference? Sex? Why?

[yin]

i refuse to explain why.

[yin]

sadism and masochism rarely go together. there's a joke that expains that.
A masochist asks a sadist to beat him/her very severely, to which a sadist answers with a malicious smile: "No, never..."