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[fobiak]

erekcjato gniot5

nic nie slysze
bo ja cie nie slucham juz
dlatego wiersze pisze
ktore pokrywa kurz

w nich znajdziesz odpowiedzi
na wszystkie twoje pytania
czlowiek czesto cos bredzi
dazac do odkochania

zakochac sie latwo
a pozniej juz same meki
wyrywam sobie wlosy
nie tylko z glowy
po to aby dojsc do siebie






















































































































z knajpy

[Brzuszek]

It leave though one under
for me

[dean]

erekcjato crap5

I hear nothing
because I do not listen to you
that is why I write poems
covered with dust

you will find all the answers in them
for all your questions
a man often drivels
dążąc do odkochania no idea

it is is to fall in love
and then only suffering
I tear my hair
not only from head
po to aby dojsc do siebie no clue





















































































































from the bar

[Brzuszek]

Why?

[dean]

because my English is poor

[Brzuszek]

poor thing

[yin]

I'm deaf to all your curses
and in order to curb my lust
I turned to writing verses
slowly gathering dust

There you can find the replies
to your ten thosand questions or above
this is how a man often lies
hoping to fall out of love

It's easy to get hooked
but then nothing can ease the pain
I know my goose is cooked
I'm tearing my hair out in vain

just trying to come to senses
























































after drinking

[lila]

the translation is better than original I think so and differ much actually it is a new poem but the idea is the same

[yin]

well, I've tried.

Fobiak's ending however is better.

I have another idea now for the ending:

just trying to find my way










from the bar

?

[lila]

it's also good and more faithful I think so, but both of them are suprising

[yin]

fobiak which do u prefer "good and faithful" or "pretty but unfaithful'?

[fobiak]

I think, pretty but unfaithful is better

[dean]

I agree... pretty and unfaithful

[dunno]

Depends what you're looking for. A wife or an affair